Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Throughout writing my paper I have found my question taking many different directions.  Now I have found it turning out solid the more I started to write. One of my major problems is the length of the paper, I cannot get it to reach five pages. Much of my paper is my opinion expressing how I feel about the subject but I have realized it should be based more upon facts since it is a research paper.  My question is about how food industries/companies get us to eat all of their product with the help of mass production. It seems to be really specific but it works out with all the articles that I have read. Hopefully my paper isn't boring because I really rather inform instead of just stating things that could be just repeated.

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