A poem I wrote recently. Wasn't sure what to do with it and this blog is just about the only audience I have, so I decided to post it here. Questions, comments, and criticism are all welcome and appreciated.
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Falling
Into an abyss
Dark and deep, corrupting me
Dying
Alone and afraid
No one to save me from breaking slowly
Rotting
Inside and feeling
Every last ounce of its pain
Decomposing
Breaking down
Scrap and blood washed away by rain
This is amazing.
ReplyDeleteIt's exactly how I feel in school right now Tyler.
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ReplyDeleteTyler, I could quite literally feel the oomph of this poem, I love the dark perspective on reality, it seems to be more realistic than the optimistic approach.
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